IMPROVED MORE DETAILED STORYBOARD

Here is a much more detailed representation of a storyboard, 30 planned out shots for the film, taking our lecturer's advice by detailing much more of the 60 seconds of film which we have to fill. (Detailed as in amount of scenes and boxes, not drawings).

This states a lot more things that the protagonist will be doing during the film, for example we have now included the Vintage shop, and at the bar buying a drink. And even shots of the main character at  the tram lines and walking up to park hill.